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Article #35482Re: fucking hell - have I lost my mind?? writing something???
From: Satis
Date: Fri, 05 Dec 2003 01:43
Date: Fri, 05 Dec 2003 01:43
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> In the description of aliens there seems to be the phrasing "(alien type) > is....." instead of "(alien type) were....."; using "were" seems to be usual > way action is written as if they were historical events, from a 3rd person > perspective. Thanks for the tip. I think I chose to do that to distinguish between the scientific information that applies across the whole of Apocalypse and the events which I've made up purely for this story. Still, you have a point, I'll consider it if I get this part II off the ground. > Over-all work is nice. Nice detail with the little bits such as badge > numbers. Thanks again. Nice to know that people still hover around agx. *Satis howard_offtherails at hotmail.com
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