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Article #35481Re: fucking hell - have I lost my mind?? writing something???
From: RandallW
Date: Thu, 04 Dec 2003 07:45
Date: Thu, 04 Dec 2003 07:45
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In the description of aliens there seems to be the phrasing "(alien type) is....." instead of "(alien type) were....."; using "were" seems to be usual way action is written as if they were historical events, from a 3rd person perspective. Over-all work is nice. Nice detail with the little bits such as badge numbers. I'm almost inspired to fire up Apoc, 'cept it's so hard on my CD-rom. "Satis" <howard_offtherails at hotmail.com> wrote in message news:c61188c5f5d8b6fbdf79c3a23e4f7493@news.teranews.com... > Hey all, > > My under-sexed, over-paid brain has been threatening to do an X-Com fanfic > for some time (about six years, as it happens) and after a hell of a lot of > false starts it's finally happened, hard drive crashes and all. > > A bit of background: it's set during Apoc, six weeks into the campaign. I > screwed around with the timeline a bit, but everything in here is drawn from > the game. Comments welcome. I present Day Forty Three. > > *Satis > Off the Rails > > > Multiworms are not intelligent creatures. They do little except feed > voraciously to support the foetuses they carry within them and they respond > to danger in a very predictable way. They did that now, picking targets at > random and crawling towards them. > > > The worms are incredibly tough creatures, able to take several hits before > they expire. Still, with eight weapons trained on them the five creatures > expired within seconds. But Multiworms are merely incubators for the next > stage. >
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Path: mbox-mo1.pugleaf.net!internal1.nntp.ash.giganews.com!border2.nntp.ash.giganews.com!border1.nntp.ash.giganews.com!firehose2!nntp4!intern1.nntp.aus1.giganews.com!border3.nntp.aus1.giganews.com!small1.nntp.aus1.giganews.com!nntp.giganews.com!newshub.sdsu.edu!news-spur1.maxwell.syr.edu!news.maxwell.syr.edu!sn-xit-03!sn-xit-04!sn-xit-01!sn-post-01!supernews.com!corp.supernews.com!not-for-mail From: "RandallW" <flibbetyfloo@nospamme.com> Newsgroups: alt.games.x-com Subject: Re: fucking hell - have I lost my mind?? writing something??? Date: Wed, 3 Dec 2003 23:45:28 -0800 Organization: Posted via Supernews, http://www.supernews.com Message-ID: <vstpgo30so1240@corp.supernews.com> References: <c61188c5f5d8b6fbdf79c3a23e4f7493@news.teranews.com> X-Priority: 3 X-MSMail-Priority: Normal X-Newsreader: Microsoft Outlook Express 6.00.2800.1158 X-MimeOLE: Produced By Microsoft MimeOLE V6.00.2800.1165 X-Complaints-To: abuse@supernews.com Lines: 43 MIME-Version: 1.0 Content-Type: text/plain; charset=UTF-8 Content-Transfer-Encoding: 7bit