Re: "Mgła w oczach"

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From: al4e
Date: Wed, 07 Jun 2006 18:44

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Użyszkodnik ::JIMMYtm:: w module news:1xm55tvin7ecq$.dlg@JIMMYtm.powered
popelnil(a) nastepujacy błąd


>> jak motyla

> IMO zbyt rozwlekły i bez rytmu.
> Popracuj nad długością i dosadnością.

kazdy wyraza sie tak jak potrafi najlepiej :)

PS. dosadnosc == wulgarnosc?

al4e

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